Screenwriters seek feedback on their scripts

“I’ve always had a love for films and that’s what I wanted to be as a kid a writer and director, but I wrote this short just to try and get back into things and I enjoyed every second of writing it Logline: After a drunken night lands him in a cell, Colin scrambles to repair his relationship, oblivious to the fact that he is the one thing that needs fixing. One more submitted by /u/Accomplished-Sky289 [link] [comments]”

“I just finished a draft of my first feature screenplay that I'm comfortable sharing publicly and would love some feedback from fresh readers. Title: Like a Heathen Format: Feature Genre: Supernatural Horror / Thriller Length: 116 pages Status: Full draft completed Logline: In 1985, when a pop star is murdered at a high-school pep rally, trapped students must escape a cult that controls minds through music, before its ritual consumes the entire school. The story is set at a New England high s”

“Hey everyone! I’m looking for feedback on the second draft of my screenplay Maddie’s World , a horror/mystery pilot presented as a late-’90s/early-2000s teen sitcom. Logline: An airheaded sitcom sidekick begins to suspect something is terribly wrong beneath the laugh track of her seemingly perfect high school life. The script shifts between bright, multi-camera sitcom scenes and single-camera horror as Bree starts noticing cracks in her reality. I’d especially appreciate thoughts on: Does the si”

“FAQ: How to post to a weekly thread? Feedback Guide for New Writers This is a thread for giving and receiving feedback on 5 of your screenplay pages. Post a link to five pages of your screenplay in a top comment. They can be any 5, but if they are not your first 5, give some context in the same comment you're linking in. As a courtesy, you can also include some of this info. Title: Format: Page Length: Genres: Logline or Summary: Feedback Concerns: Provide feedback in reply-comments. Please”

“I had recently received my evaluation from final drafts big break screenwriting contest . What I got was some really good and positive feedback on my pilot. One of the things that was brought up was shortening the script down from 30 pages. Yet somehow after multiple revisions and edits I have ended up with more pages than I originally had. So Should continue to try and cut it down to 22 or 24 pages mark or should I add to it and aim for the 45 pages hour long tv script? submitted by”

“Title: The Damned Format: Screenplay Page Length: 22 Draft status: week 3, EARLY Genres: Horror, comedy Logline: When a group of clout-chasing ghost-hunters of various levels of faith get caught in a real-life horror movie, things quickly go from bad to worse Feedback concerns: N/A, early stages Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1vq08lIUEbMefX7aGw2hzIv23CJTu_XzC/view?usp=drivesdk submitted by /u/RogueKnight77 [link] [comments]”

“Hey guys I’m 91🔄 and recently finished writing my first feature film and would love to hear any feedback or constructive criticism, please don’t hurt my feelings tho lol https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RX7By4lC2njwQOdHJK\_VX6wbSftMdRxxW-eZ4GCP65k/edit?usp=drivesdk submitted by /u/Character-Eggplant62 [link] [comments]”

“FAQ: How to post to a weekly thread? Feedback Guide for New Writers Post your script swap requests here! Alternately, if you are on storypeer.com - call out your script by name so people can search for it. Please do not identify yourself publicly if you claim a script on storypeer, but follow the "open to contact" rules . NOTE: Please refrain from upvoting or downvoting — just respond to scripts you’d like to exchange or read. How to Swap If you want to offer your script for a swap , p”

“FAQ: How to post to a weekly thread? Feedback Guide for New Writers This is a thread for giving and receiving feedback on 5 of your screenplay pages. Post a link to five pages of your screenplay in a top comment. They can be any 5, but if they are not your first 5, give some context in the same comment you're linking in. As a courtesy, you can also include some of this info. Title: Format: Page Length: Genres: Logline or Summary: Feedback Concerns: Provide feedback in reply-comments. Please”

“Factors : (the writing, engaged storytelling, your own vision etc etc etc) submitted by /u/Prestigious-Shine8 [link] [comments]”

“You have a bulletproof outline. You’re excited to start. Maybe a little nervous. What are your rituals before you sit down and write Fade In? submitted by /u/EddieGrabowski [link] [comments]”

“Hi, everybody! 👋 I've been a screenwriter for the last three to five years. I got into screenwriting when I was 14 years old but I didn't start seriously writing until I was 21 I loved the movies since I was a little girl. What about you guys? submitted by /u/fade7827 [link] [comments]”

“Hey all, I've been a silent lurker on this sub for the better part of two years just soaking in advice and stories that have been shared to help me on this journey. Even though I love both writing and film, I had absolutely no idea what I was getting into. But, I recently finished my first ever screenplay, Obediently Yours . Here's the logline: In 1946, when a South Carolina police chief brutalizes and blinds Black army veteran Isaac Woodard, Orson Welles takes his story to the airwaves”

“I’ve officially finished trimming and modifying my first feature-length screenplay! It’s a comedy with dramatic scenes to balance things out, and it’s about 120 pages. I’ve done a table read that ran approximately 103 minutes, partly because some of the dialogue moves quickly. A few people have also read it, enjoyed it, and offered helpful notes. For those who’ve completed a feature screenplay, what did you do next? I’m curious about getting more feedback and figuring out where to go from here.”

“Hi everyone, I've taken a minute to revise a pitch deck for a series that I created. It's been a while and I had to put this project aside for a little while but now that I've opened some doors with potential managers, I decided to revise my pitch deck. Look, I'm entirely realistic about the odds against me on this project. It's a longshot. I know that I might never get in front of Netflix, HBO, Apple TV and Amazon, but still, I'm desperate to have some fresh eyes on this”

“Very interested in knowing how people will react to this one. Logline: When the estranged, aging members of a notorious Paris prank collective reunite in the catacombs to mourn their founder, they discover he died defending their legacy from grotesque insectine creatures that plagiarize their faces, jokes and culture — and sometimes murder their critics. Link submitted by /u/NeverShallDoHarmToMe [link] [comments]”

“Hello all, I'm looking for some feedback on a screenplay that's very WIP. Let me know what you think, especially about the concept! Title: Paternal Format: Feature (WIP) Page Length: 10 Genre(s): Psychological drama, supernatural horror Logline: A dissociated, down-on-his-luck drug dealer is forced to reconnect with his estranged, successful brother when the voice of his dead father begins to unravel his grip on reality and time. Feedback Concerns: Looking for general thoughts on the ove”

“FAQ: How to post to a weekly thread? Feedback Guide for New Writers Post your script swap requests here! Alternately, if you are on storypeer.com - call out your script by name so people can search for it. Please do not identify yourself publicly if you claim a script on storypeer, but follow the "open to contact" rules . NOTE: Please refrain from upvoting or downvoting — just respond to scripts you’d like to exchange or read. How to Swap If you want to offer your script for a swap , p”

“FAQ: How to post to a weekly thread? Feedback Guide for New Writers This is a thread for giving and receiving feedback on 5 of your screenplay pages. Post a link to five pages of your screenplay in a top comment. They can be any 5, but if they are not your first 5, give some context in the same comment you're linking in. As a courtesy, you can also include some of this info. Title: Format: Page Length: Genres: Logline or Summary: Feedback Concerns: Provide feedback in reply-comments. Please”

“Hi there! 👋 I’ve written a lot of screenplays, optioned a fair few, and had one of my screenplays produced into a feature film currently available on Amazon Prime and Apple TV. Yay! I’ve also had a lot of projects collapse for various reasons, and suffered through just about every writer crisis and heartbreak you can imagine. Boohoo. One of the many tragedies a spec writer suffers is writing something awesome only to discover in the 11th hour that someone else has written something similar, and”

“Let me know if anyone has any feedback! The Damned Feature 5 pages Early draft Horror, comedy Feedback concerns: n/a. Based on an abandoned asylum and town i visited https://drive.google.com/file/d/1pne2Y1Gi2jp64ZVo0Wxld-agvNTUrO1D/view?usp=drivesdk submitted by /u/RogueKnight77 [link] [comments]”

“I finally did it. I finished the first draft of my first feature-length screenplay tonight. It’s a comedy called From Friend to Dad , and the first draft came in at a ridiculous 165 pages. 😂 So no, I’m definitely not pretending it’s ready to send out. The next step is a serious trimming/rewrite pass, and I’m hoping to eventually get it around 110 pages or less. But tonight I honestly don’t care about the page count. I’m just proud that I finished it. I’ve had ideas for movies for years, and thi”

“Poll and advice please! First off, let me start by saying I’m a writer who is disabled. Right now I’m writing an animation script with lots of disabled characters. I’m navigating how to describe the disabilities in the script. I could: Use action lines throughout that make the disabilities clear without ever naming the disabilities. For example, having a character use sign language instead of saying they’re deaf. In abstract this method would be my favorite cause the disabilities are a big part”

“FAQ: How to post to a weekly thread? Feedback Guide for New Writers This is a thread for giving and receiving feedback on 5 of your screenplay pages. Post a link to five pages of your screenplay in a top comment. They can be any 5, but if they are not your first 5, give some context in the same comment you're linking in. As a courtesy, you can also include some of this info. Title: Format: Page Length: Genres: Logline or Summary: Feedback Concerns: Provide feedback in reply-comments. Please”

“Hello everyone, I've been looking for dedicated Indian channels for script feedback but haven’t had much luck so far. If there are any Indians here who’d be willing to share some notes, I’d really appreciate it! Genre: Mystery/Thriller/Horror Pages: 13 Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1TnpIYdVTwOJAEizJTj76oYdsZzlrX9i0/view?usp=sharing Would love to know your thoughts on the story as well as language (Hindi is not my first language- so it would be helpful to know if this is workable writ”

“Hi all! I'm a videographer/editor by trade looking to expand my creativity with the plan to write, produce, and direct my very own independent low budget feature! I usually work in reality, docuseries, true crime, and wedding footage. This my first time diving into scripted content and I would love if you could PLEASE let me know what you think! And if you have a script send it my way and I will read yours so we can all help each other out! Title: DISCREPANCY Format: Feature Page Length: 42”

“Hi guys! I just finished the first draft of my screenplay! Let me know what you think! Pages: 90 Genre: Mystery/comedy Format: Feature Logline: 11 year old Brody Francis investigates a strange mystery after he finds out that trick or treating is illegal. Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1s2RJ8Se990HO0cPfVkz9Ta9hPKvdIX4r/view?usp=drivesdk submitted by /u/CuriousStatement700 [link] [comments]”

“I found half of one online, but it's very different from the final film. I'm wondering if anyone has any drafts closer to the production draft? submitted by /u/jemsplitter [link] [comments]”

“FAQ: How to post to a weekly thread? Feedback Guide for New Writers Post your script swap requests here! Alternately, if you are on storypeer.com - call out your script by name so people can search for it. Please do not identify yourself publicly if you claim a script on storypeer, but follow the "open to contact" rules . NOTE: Please refrain from upvoting or downvoting — just respond to scripts you’d like to exchange or read. How to Swap If you want to offer your script for a swap , p”

“I'm currently working on the outline for an animated feature script about three kids invited to a robot fight, but I'm having trouble finding ways to make the audience really feel for them.. The kids are like 9-12 and have to beat against a bunch of grownups, but I need some help out with the characters' development/arcs. I have one kid who likes trains tho submitted by /u/Impressive_Lie_6623 [link] [comments]”

“Currently working on a script for a hangout-esque movie about two kids, both aged ten, and how they spend their summer when one finds out he's moving to a different city come August. There are several other characters (primarily the parents of both kids and the teenaged sister of the one who's moving) but the biggest issue I've run into is writing the dialogue for the ten year olds. Every line I've written either feels too childish for their age or too mature for their age. Any t”

“Hi, I am rewriting a fantasy script I wrote called "Archer's Club", and I could really use your feedback on it:) Title: Archer's Club Format: feature Page length:92 Genre: Action Fantasy Logline: When a traitorous general kills his parents, a young man must join a group of justice serving people to foil an even greater conspiracy. This is a script I wrote a while ago, but never submitted it for feedback before. Your thoughts on it would mean a lot to me, and would help me impro”

“Hey guys, I need a bit of a pep talk. I'm plowing through my current draft, on page 60 of what I hope will be a 95 to 100 feature. When I started this script, I was super-excited about this project! Writing was so easy! I practically leapt out of bed to dash to my laptop, I was that jazzed about this work. But now, the initial sugar rush has burnt out. I still believe in this project... but... man, writing it has become a grinding slog. What's really distressing is that when I reread my”

“Oh wow, yesterday I finished the first draft of my first feature and second overall professional script yesterday afternoon. A huge accomplishment for me. Title: The Incredibly Mr. Lonely Genre: Drama Page length: 110 pages Draft status: first draft Logline: After his father’s death leaves him to confront his own mortality, Ben Brooker, a numbed-out DC consultant still privately answering to a childhood nickname, “Mr. Lonely,” takes an impulsive trip to Tokyo with “Mr. Wolf,” his devoted best fr”

“Hey there, I just finished writing a screenplay that I started 2 years ago. This is my first attempt, first draft. I'd really appreciate any feedback or criticism. Title: HAPPY BIRTHDAY Genre: Psychological thriller Lenght: 91 pages Logline: Six clever teenagers are trapped in a gated cottage during a birthday party, where an unknown assassin begins to dictate deadly rules. https://drive.google.com/file/d/1FuBOvT2khgiLaoerrDzY-HTuFM09B_8-/view?usp=sharing submitted by /u/EmilyDel”

“Title: Southside High Format: Feature Page Length: 115 Draft: Near-Final Genres: Action-comedy, coming of age, drama Feedback concerns: N/A Logline: In a militarized, alt-future 2000s America where teenagers legally carry guns, a burned-out, wisecracking teen dealer and his gang of stoner outlaws uncover their principal’s fascist disappearance program and bet everything on exposing it all on Junior Prom night. submitted by /u/RogueKnight77 [link] [comments]”

“FAQ: How to post to a weekly thread? Feedback Guide for New Writers Post your script swap requests here! Alternately, if you are on storypeer.com - call out your script by name so people can search for it. Please do not identify yourself publicly if you claim a script on storypeer, but follow the "open to contact" rules . NOTE: Please refrain from upvoting or downvoting — just respond to scripts you’d like to exchange or read. How to Swap If you want to offer your script for a swap , p”

“This is probably a really, really small achievement compared to the kind that are usually posted on this sub, but I thought it was a small win worth sharing. For context, I'm a 24 year old university student and aspiring filmmaker who's had prior on-set experiences working on both amateur student films and professional film and television in my home country, with roles ranging from PA to 2nd AD. I've also recently had the opportunity to intern at the national broadcaster where I was”

“Has anyone heard back if their script advanced to shortlist? Or if it didn't make it? submitted by /u/DueBand4327 [link] [comments]”

“Apologies for the vague title, didn't know how best to summarise this quandary... I'm a UK screenwriter, still working towards getting my break, but with a pilot under my belt that's got me some praise and entry on a popular entry-level scheme. Thing is, I know I should have more ideas, if not fully drafted scripts in my portfolio before I make moves towards getting representation or generals. I had this idea for a pilot script that takes its cues from an already existing, very popul”

“Hi everybody, I'm writing some concepts for a script I'm preparing, and I was wonder if this resonates / it's interesting. Thank you for reading Travelling one day to the Equator line. And walking on it straight, and up and down, dancing. Falling. It’s impossible for a human being to walk a straight line. Or to draw it. Or for it to exist. It’s a concept based on being a concept, and therefore, prone to failure. Its existence relies on its non-existence. She misses having sex with hi”

“Does anyone have any recs for people who read and review your script professionally. I'm still fairly new to the scene and I'm not sure how professional scripts look. I can think my script is fine then learn it's terrible. I was also wondering what a fair price for that service looks like. Edit: I read a lot of scripts. I read scripts of movies I liked. I still find them all very different. submitted by /u/ladyroselier [link] [comments]”

“Writing is so hard, but it feels so good to hit a big milestone! I'm feeling kinda hopeful and kinda nervous. The other producer on the project says the script is looking solid, so we're going to start sending it out to actors to try attaching talent. If you're working on something right now, keep working . There's so much about this industry we can't control. Just keep putting time in on the script. It usually pays off. We're aiming to get this movie made in the first ha”

“can’t post pictures here… so they’re down below :) https://drive.google.com/file/d/1oXw4-A7o-NvvDYlXEBpfuItmeqpSgW6G/view?usp=drivesdk submitted by /u/beingddf [link] [comments]”

“So, I wrote a script (as in it’s on its 2-3d (maybe 4-6th) draft (I edited it in between, so I lost count)) and I re-read it a few days ago and… I wonder if it would work better as a book? Maybe work on both versions and see how it goes. It’s a very personal story, you’re kinda in the characters head a lot (you mostly don’t know what they don’t know) and at its core it’s about relationships and interpersonal struggles, and dealing with abuse (in that case emotional, financial and a bit of physic”

“FAQ: How to post to a weekly thread? Feedback Guide for New Writers Post your script swap requests here! Alternately, if you are on storypeer.com - call out your script by name so people can search for it. Please do not identify yourself publicly if you claim a script on storypeer, but follow the "open to contact" rules . NOTE: Please refrain from upvoting or downvoting — just respond to scripts you’d like to exchange or read. How to Swap If you want to offer your script for a swap , p”

“Two BL 6s + Slamdance feedback: How do I actually improve the plot? I taught myself screenwriting starting in March 2026 while I was on medical leave and have written three features since. I’ve had one QF at PAGE, another script SF at Scriptapalooza, and a couple festival selections. Obviously nothing crazy or life changing, but enough encouraging signs to make me want to keep developing my craft. My current script has now gotten two BL evaluations: BL #1: Overall 6 | Premise 8 | Plot 4 | Charac”

“FAQ: How to post to a weekly thread? Feedback Guide for New Writers This is a thread for giving and receiving feedback on 5 of your screenplay pages. Post a link to five pages of your screenplay in a top comment. They can be any 5, but if they are not your first 5, give some context in the same comment you're linking in. As a courtesy, you can also include some of this info. Title: Format: Page Length: Genres: Logline or Summary: Feedback Concerns: Provide feedback in reply-comments. Please”

“Hello. I just recently finished the rough draft of my horror script I hope to bring to life in a full length feature film. I was hoping to find some horror enthusiasts that could spare some time to give me feedback. Warning! This content contains some gore so if that's not your thing I'd skip. I'd be willing to give feedback on a project of yours as well. The title so far is Mr. What? and is 88 pages. Logline: A loner girl moves to a new apartment and encounters a very creepy mysteri”

“Title: Boo Format: Short Page length: 5 pages Draft: Shooting Genre: Comedy/Absurdist Logline: A young man seeks therapy for his potentially life-threatening fear of being startled. Feedback concerns: Does it have comedic potential? Do the setups and payoffs work? Just wanna know what you guys think. The script is a bit of a goof, not anything too serious - just something to make with my film school friends. It's deliberately not a spec because I'm going to direct it myself :) script her”

“My first script I've ever wrote. I probably have done about four drafts now. My plan is to make it, I got rid of a bunch of the directing and shot stuff to make it more readable but I do want to direct it so I left stuff in there. Sorry it kinda starts with a flashback, I know that's a no no. would love to know what y'all think. EP.1 submitted by /u/Holycowbatman70 [link] [comments]”

“FAQ: How to post to a weekly thread? Feedback Guide for New Writers Post your script swap requests here! Alternately, if you are on storypeer.com - call out your script by name so people can search for it. Please do not identify yourself publicly if you claim a script on storypeer, but follow the "open to contact" rules . NOTE: Please refrain from upvoting or downvoting — just respond to scripts you’d like to exchange or read. How to Swap If you want to offer your script for a swap , p”

“I see. I was so close-minded to only writing a script with what's happening on the screen, I could totally see myself discussing other things while it plays in the background. Thank you. This was really helpful!”

“FAQ: How to post to a weekly thread? Feedback Guide for New Writers This is a thread for giving and receiving feedback on 5 of your screenplay pages. Post a link to five pages of your screenplay in a top comment. They can be any 5, but if they are not your first 5, give some context in the same comment you're linking in. As a courtesy, you can also include some of this info. Title: Format: Page Length: Genres: Logline or Summary: Feedback Concerns: Provide feedback in reply-comments. Please”

“Title: All Flowers in Time Format: Stage Play (intended for adaptation into a feature screenplay) Page Length: 42 pages Genres: Drama / Romance / Music / Historical Fiction Logline or Summary: In two recording studios separated by three years, singer Elizabeth Fraser’s relationships with Jeff Buckley and Massive Attack’s Robert Del Naja become intertwined through music, grief and unfinished love. Moving between the creation of “All Flowers in Time Bend Towards the Sun” in 1994 and “Teardrop” in”

“This is the Feedback I received from my pitch: "When well-executed, these intricately designed plots can be extraordinarily satisfying, though it's a high-wire act in balancing between doling out exactly the right information at exactly the right time while also not spoon-feeding the audience or allowing them to ever get a step ahead of you as the storyteller. Within this pitch itself, it's simply too difficult for me to assess whether that intricate plotting is achieved in your sto”

“Last week I posted about struggling with a twist and got plenty of great advice (the kind that made me want to sit down and write!) I ended up rewriting my first 25 pages, which (at least I think) made for a much smoother payoff down the road. It likely still needs work, but I'm feeling really good about this current draft. Thanks! (If you're interested in reading shoot me a DM, I'd be happy to swap scripts) submitted by /u/Gronksaysitall [link] [comments]”

“LOGLINE: When a burned out genie is accidentally summoned by an anxious young man convinced any wish he makes will be twisted into a curse, the genie must find a way to convince him to use his wishes before time runs out. https://drive.google.com/file/d/15JZckX_QPFGVYDiyPA1p5cWm2dRsRTCt/view?usp=sharing Title: Make a Wish, Kid Format: Feature Page Length: 34 (Act 1), estimated 100-110 pages total. Genre: Comedy/drama Feedback Concerns: I haven't posted anything for review online in many, man”

“I've been writing every single day for roughly half my life. Came from a poetry background in college. Made some independent comic books and graphic novels. I write scripts for Youtube when I didn't have anything on a simmer. Couple weeks back I fell down a rabbit hole for screenwriting formats and I think I'm in love. Written a 90-page teleplay for a pilot and now working on a short film. I'm still at the find readers/get feedback early stage but... damn... I really love this. &”